Blog feedback

Task Research and Planning Part	Incomplete/ Limited 0-7 marks	Basic 8-11 marks	Proficient 12-15 marks	Excellent 16-20 marks	Overall
Reflective Technology HW			ü		15/20 Grade B
Conventions			ü
Analysis of music magazine			ü
Analysis of school mag front cover				ü
School magazine names & mastheads				ü
Photography shot types			ü
Photography portrait			ü
WWW:      You are managing the demands of AS Media Studies well and have learnt to adapt to a range of new technologies.    Your blog is well organised and you are meeting deadlines.    You add detailed descriptions to each post so that it is clear to an examiner what you are doing.     Your photography is considered, well framed and developing in preparation for your coursework. EBI:       You need to use a range of media terminology in your blog posts.     Continue to highlight/colour code your analysis to ensure you have included all aspects of the analysis formula.     Try to think outside of the box and research independently. It would be great to see some wider reading, research and ideas on your blog than just those from the spreadsheet. Pupil Comment: I understand that I need to include more key terminology in my blog posts, so when I post new blog posts, I will take this into consideration and make sure I do this to ensure my work is at the best it can be. I think that highlighting my work in different colours will help me to see if I have included enough terminology and included it where and when it is needed.