These are my final three designs for my magazine product called Pop it. My front cover, contents page and double page spread. These final versions have been adapted and changed throughout my project to finally come up with these, as my original designs weren't as good as these ones. Personally, I think that all of my designs tie together and stick to my house style which is really important. The quality of my designs has definitely improved over time which is really important also.
Friday, 22 April 2016
Evaluation Question 7
7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
In this presentation on emaze, I have done a comparison between each front cover and each contents page one 2 slides, it clearly shows the difference between my skills and knowledge back then up to now, and it gives an explanation what has changed majorly and why.
In this presentation on emaze, I have done a comparison between each front cover and each contents page one 2 slides, it clearly shows the difference between my skills and knowledge back then up to now, and it gives an explanation what has changed majorly and why.
Evaluation Question 6
6. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this
product?
In this video, I discuss all of the technologies that I have used since I have started working on my coursework. I have briefly stated why I liked the pieces of technology and how I found them to use.
Evaluation Question 5
5. How did you attract/address your audience?
I used a website called ThingLink to address directly and identify the points which helped me to direct my magazine to my targeted audience. Below are the results:
I used a website called ThingLink to address directly and identify the points which helped me to direct my magazine to my targeted audience. Below are the results:
Evaluation Question 4
4. Who would be the audience for your media product?
This is my 4th evaluation question that I created on Microsoft Powerpoint but exported as a video to allow the powerpoint to look through instead of just adding each slide to my blog separately. I have discussed many different reasons as to why I have chosen to focus specifically on young girls.
Tuesday, 19 April 2016
Evaluation Question 3
3. What kind of media institution (publisher) might distribute your media product and why?
Here is my 3rd evaluation question that I have completed about my finished magazine using a website called Powtoon. I have included explanations and examples about my decision for who and why would distribute my magazine.
Wednesday, 13 April 2016
Evaluation Question 2
2. How does your media product represent particular social groups?
I have used a website called Prezi to present the different social groups that I have used within my media product.
Thursday, 31 March 2016
Evaluation Question 1
1. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
Here is my first evaluation question that I have completed using a website called Padlet. It is a very useful website that is easy to use and it sets out your work in a neat way. I have tried to cover every aspect of the question, talking about the production of my front cover, my contents page, and my double page spread. I have included a comparison of conventions from a well-known published magazine, to mine to see if I have actually followed the conventions, or challenged them in an effective way.
Final feedback from my teacher
Here is a picture of the feedback I have had from my teacher, this has helped me massively to make changes to improve my work. This has also helped me a lot because I know that the feedback is genuine and not rushed like it could be with my peers that filled in my questionnaires. From making changes because of these comments, has allowed me to add more skill and use a variety of different things such as fonts, magazine topics and designs
Monday, 14 March 2016
Final front cover development
After completing all designs of my front cover, contents page and double page spread, I realised that the front cover has a massive impact on the amount of consumers and it has to reflect on the initial target audience. I reviewed my front cover designs and even though the feedback for all of the designs was good and positive, there was just something missing that I felt like I had to change to improve it.
As I knew that I wanted to improve the design, I took the design from my final design that I decided was going to be my front cover at the time, and modified it, by keeping the same main image and cover lines etc, but just adjusting the positioning and the layout of it to allow the magazine to look professional whilst still suiting the audience of my choice.
When you was little, you probably wanted to be older and be all grown up so you could be like the 'bigger girls'; so I think that this design reflects on this really well. It has news/information about what the girls want to read, however the layout to it has more of an 'older' look to try and incorporate the sense of the teenage girls growing up and wanting to be older.
Because I edited my previous final version of my front cover, it took me a bit of time to get the layout to be how I wanted it to be, but I didn't have to think about finding a main image or the information that was going to be included on the front cover. Therefore, a lot of thought has still gone into this design but it has a sense of all designs being used in it.
The design is below:
Personally, this is my favorite front cover design that I have produced, however I cannot just go on my preference as this would be biased, so I have gathered some extra opinions off other peers and friends around me...
- "I love this magazine design, if I was to see this in a shop when I was of the suitable target audience, I would 100% purchase this. I think this design is more grown up and eye catching. Definitely use this design".
- "Effectively, this design is way better than any of the others you have designed Mia, you can see that a lot of thought has been put into this one".
- "It's a tricky decision to be honest, I think that this design and your previous final design are both amazing and you've put a lot of time and effort into them both, but as this is your final bit of feedback in order for you to choose the final front cover design, I am going to tell you to take this one forward. It stands out a lot more and the colours put together look really good".
- "I like this design, choose this one to take forward".
After receiving a bit of verbal feedback, it has made me think about the type of design I want to take forward with me to make sure that my magazine looks the best that it can. I have looked back through the previous final design and I have looked at this one, to compare the two and try to incorporate the peer feedback with my own opinion. From this, I have come to the decision that this will be my absolute final design I am going to make my front cover of my magazine.
Wednesday, 2 March 2016
Monday, 29 February 2016
Feedback changes with audience feedback
From the comments on my front cover design blog post, I have made a few changes to the magazine front covers and swapped some of the features around so they mix together to make one front cover. The changes made are below:
Feedback from double page spread
I received feedback from my peers and family based on my final design of my contents page, I got the feedback via Whatsapp and Imessage by sending the image of the final design along with these questions for them to answer:
- What do you like about the double page spread?
- Could I change anything to improve the double page spread?
- Do you think the double page spread is suitable for the audience of teenage girls of 12-14 years old?
- If not, how could I make it more appropriate for this target audience?
- Would you say there is too much text on the page to read?
Below is the feedback that I have analysed:
Feedback from contents page
I received feedback from my peers based on my final design of my contents page, I got the feedback via Whatsapp and Imessage by sending the image of the final design along with the questions for them to answer. The questions are below:
- What do you like about the contents page?
- Could I change anything to improve the contents page?
- Do you think the contents page is suitable for the audience of teenage girls of 12-14 years old?
- If not, how could I make it more appropriate for this target audience?
Thursday, 25 February 2016
Double page spread article with feedback
Tuesday, 23 February 2016
Double page spread process and final design
Friday, 19 February 2016
Contents page process and final design
Friday, 5 February 2016
Feedback
After producing different designs for the front cover of my magazine 'pop it' I have gathered my final 3 designs. I am prepared to use any of the final 3, however, in order to choose the final product to take forward I didn't think I should go by just my own opinion because it could potentially be biased because its my own work, so from this I decided to ask a few peers/friends and family about what they think.
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I gathered feedback for this question via whatsapp/imessage and direct conversation. As evidence of the feedback, I have screenshotted a few responses from whatsapp/imessage and quoted the direct conversation I have had with people. I did this so I could incorporate a variety of different technologies and ways to receive feedback other than just conducting surveys all the time. I also believe that feedback from surveys can sometimes be rushed so these answers this time will possibly be more thought through and reliable.
I proposed the question of:
From the 3 front covers I have sent/shown you, which one is the best and why?
The feedback I received:
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I gathered feedback for this question via whatsapp/imessage and direct conversation. As evidence of the feedback, I have screenshotted a few responses from whatsapp/imessage and quoted the direct conversation I have had with people. I did this so I could incorporate a variety of different technologies and ways to receive feedback other than just conducting surveys all the time. I also believe that feedback from surveys can sometimes be rushed so these answers this time will possibly be more thought through and reliable.
I proposed the question of:
From the 3 front covers I have sent/shown you, which one is the best and why?
The feedback I received:
- "I cant decide between the first front cover or the last one, I think they're both suitable for the audience you're targeting. I don't particularly think that the main image on number 2 is the best, the layout on number 3 is my favourite however." - Stacie
- "I would definitely say the last design, I think it includes a bit of everything that is on your example sheet. I especially like the little images that show what the magazines will be like, and I love the main image, it goes perfectly with the music theme." - Martina
- "I don't really know what a typical music magazine should look like but looking at the 3 designs you have made, I would say that number 3 is the best because all aspects of it stand out and it looks the most attractive for girls." - Warren
- "If I was to go to the shop and buy a magazine I would pick up the magazine with design 3 as the front cover, this is what kind of front cover I look for when I buy music magazines, and I buy them every week. This front cover is full of colours and interesting headlines and free presents for the audience." - Megan (13 years old, part of my target audience)
After receiving all of the feedback off the 10 people I asked (9 being female, 1 being male) I got the following results...
- Design 1 = 0 votes
- Design 2 = 4 votes
- Design 3 = 6 votes
Because the majority of the votes go with design number 3, this is the design I will be taking forward with me to receive feedback off my teacher. Then going onto using it to produce my final magazine front cover. I am pleased with the research I have conducted and with the results I have received!
Thursday, 4 February 2016
Photography
In this slideshow, I have taken some photos of my nephew to practice and play around with my camera a bit more to gain confidence with it. I tried out a few different angles and shots. We both had fun taking the handful of photos!
Created with flickr slideshow.
Created with flickr slideshow.
Final 3 magazine front cover designs


My final three magazine designs are in this blog post. To make my decision on which front cover I am going to take forward, I will gather some feedback by either a survey, blog comments or another way. I will go with the majority of the votes from peers, teachers/adults and family. I would be happy to use any of the following designs as my front cover. My favourite is number 3, as it has a variety of different things/aspects included on it, and it shows a wide range of knowledge I have taken from my lessons such as: Masthead, cover lines, anchorage text, incentives, thumbnail images, main image with a medium long shot, eye level with direct mode of address, also included a bar code and price.
Tuesday, 2 February 2016
Magazine front cover 3
Magazine front cover 2
From my previous blog post, we can see how I am producing all of my magazine front covers using Adobe Fireworks. As I am starting to use the programme more and more, I am getting more used to it and feeling more confident in trying new things on it. Because of this reason, I wanted to make more than one magazine front cover to see if I can produce a variety of different professional looking magazine front covers to chose from when it comes to picking the final one.
Below is a few different versions of my second magazine front cover designs, where I have changed a few of the key components round, such as the masthead, the main image, the cover line, etc...
Below is a few different versions of my second magazine front cover designs, where I have changed a few of the key components round, such as the masthead, the main image, the cover line, etc...
Evaluation of my first draft
In these screenshots, I have evaluated my first magazine draft of pop it. With the results of this evaluation I will make the improvements in my other front covers that I am yet to produce. Hopefully, by adding all of these suggestions and improvements into one magazine front cover it will help me to achieve a higher mark and a more professional looking magazine front cover.
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