Feedback from contents page

I received feedback from my peers based on my final design of my contents page, I got the feedback via Whatsapp and Imessage by sending the image of the final design along with the questions for them to answer. The questions are below:

1. What do you like about the contents page?
2. Could I change anything to improve the contents page?
3. Do you think the contents page is suitable for the audience of teenage girls of 12-14 years old?
4. If not, how could I make it more appropriate for this target audience?

Below is the feedback that I have analysed: