Feedback from double page spread

I received feedback from my peers and family based on my final design of my contents page, I got the feedback via Whatsapp and Imessage by sending the image of the final design along with these questions for them to answer:

1. What do you like about the double page spread?
2. Could I change anything to improve the double page spread?
3. Do you think the double page spread is suitable for the audience of teenage girls of 12-14 years old?
4. If not, how could I make it more appropriate for this target audience?
5. Would you say there is too much text on the page to read?

Below is the feedback that I have analysed: